Screenshot 1: added a picture & teaser on the left of the page. the picture was originally facing left but i free transformed it to flip because it fit better on the page. my three main colours are red, black and white so i wanted my font to follow suite so i decided that red would be a good contrasting colour to use.
screenshot 2: i also added a live reviews teaser to the right side of the page with the final image on my page. i used a puff on the headline but not on the other stories as i wanted the information to be more direct at a glance. i have also resized the main image to fill more space and to make his hands more visible. i also moved my headline down away from the red section of my models t-shirt.
screenshot 3: (selection for the story on the front cover)i didn't think that the photo contained enough of the mixing desk and model which is why i used screen shot 4.
screen shot 4: this photo is more condensed and shows more emotion and i like the composition.
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